I am a dog
I wonder why humans walk on two legs and not four.
I hear other dogs barking .
I see people marching past.
I want to go and see them.
I am a male.
I pretend to fight with my friend.
I feel happy when people arrive home.
I touch and play with my toys.
I worry when my owner leaves.
I cry when i'm alone.
I am a dog
I understand I have a great owner.
I say I love you to my owner.
I dream of going to the park.
I try to talk to my owner.
I hope I don't leave .
I am a dog.
Hi Josh
ReplyDeleteI feel like I am inside the mind of the dog when I read your poem. Keep up the great writing.
Hi Josh
ReplyDeleteI feel like when i read it i am happy you have a cute dog wish i had one like that
how many sisters do you have?
hi my name is Louie I go to kaingaroa school I liked how you put a pitcher in your story
ReplyDeletehi kade here i love your poem and your punctuation to whats your favour sport
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